Nirenia's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

It getting there but i think you need to work on your shadow to separate those white glove also for the arm you don't want that much contrast between the shadow and the light side because to a viewer it look like you are imply an edge so try to add more gradiant to reflect the idea of a curve surface.With only 2 tone thing can get really confusing that something that require a good deal of compositional skill and planning to achieve.The problem is when white portion overlap white portion without an outline it can become confusing.