scrap's book
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I think it would add visual story telling if you would actually show abit of some kind of magic glow around those item because right now the story telling isn't quiet there yet in my own opinion.Adding that surnatural glow help the viewer understand it not simply object falling or attach on a string.

I don't think those feet are dark enough.The hand habe strangly proportionated.The cloth design is also kinda strange in my opinion.You got a ''mage robe'' baggy pant and some sandal but that doesn't fit with the rest is the vest in my opinion .It like he trying to be two character at the same time.It confuse between a noble and a street magicien.Try to clarify is statue in society it generally help make you design more coherent in this kind of setting.Since in those time there was a clear cast system maybe not in your universe but it can still help to think in this fashion.

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scrap's book - by scrap - 07-04-2020, 08:01 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-04-2020, 08:13 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-04-2020, 08:34 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-04-2020, 08:40 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-04-2020, 09:18 AM
RE: scrap's book - by Pubic Enemy - 07-06-2020, 12:34 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-06-2020, 09:45 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-06-2020, 10:07 AM
RE: scrap's book - by bonesworth - 07-06-2020, 10:54 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-07-2020, 03:06 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-07-2020, 09:26 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-08-2020, 09:17 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-08-2020, 10:13 AM
RE: scrap's book - by chubby_cat - 07-08-2020, 10:40 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-08-2020, 07:18 PM
RE: scrap's book - by Pubic Enemy - 07-09-2020, 08:39 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-09-2020, 09:56 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-10-2020, 08:17 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-12-2020, 03:56 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-12-2020, 05:21 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-12-2020, 07:28 AM
RE: scrap's book - by cgmythology - 07-12-2020, 06:26 PM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-15-2020, 07:49 AM
RE: scrap's book - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 02:39 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-17-2020, 08:51 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-19-2020, 06:50 AM
RE: scrap's book - by Pubic Enemy - 07-19-2020, 11:11 PM
RE: scrap's book - by ognjiša - 07-20-2020, 01:22 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-20-2020, 03:46 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-20-2020, 05:09 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-21-2020, 07:47 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-25-2020, 08:23 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-25-2020, 09:26 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-27-2020, 07:08 AM
RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 07-27-2020, 09:14 AM
RE: scrap's book - by Demon Lizardman - 07-27-2020, 12:11 PM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-27-2020, 05:28 PM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-28-2020, 07:50 AM
RE: scrap's book - by chubby_cat - 07-28-2020, 01:48 PM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 07-29-2020, 08:32 AM
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RE: scrap's book - by darktiste - 08-02-2020, 11:57 AM
RE: scrap's book - by scrap - 08-03-2020, 08:02 AM
RE: scrap's book - by xelfereht - 08-04-2020, 05:23 AM
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