crit please !

[gumby]

Hello ! Id like to get some critique to push this piece further. Im not really happy with it at the moment.

Thanks !

[benjaminbach]

Problemareas and paintover. Basicly you should push the "depth" in it a bit more. And being more precise in your renderingstyle and less loose would make the picture more tight.


Also, I'd leave out the plants and fix the perspective a little :) try make a separate layer w. your vanishing point etc.

Hope it helps

/B

[gumby]

thank you thats actually really helpfull !

here is an update ! [img][/img]