I would greatly appreciate your criticue/advice on this sketch!

[DimikA]

Hi, please tell me your oppinion on this. I'm trying to improve and every critique will be useful. Thank you for your time!


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[Heavenwill]

Hey !

Watch out for the pose, it doesn't look very comfortable. It looks like his left arm is pushed in front of him because it doesn't fit the perspective.
I tried also to resolve the pose, still strange around the waist area.

Other than than I absolutely love the way you rendered the face and hands, great work there

Hope it helps

[DimikA]

Thank you, I'll be more careful with the pose and perspective in the next drawings I make. And the overpaint you did made the mistakes very obvios and helped me a lot.