Bloodsports critique

[donnguyenart]

Hey everybody, I did this piece for bloodsports and I'm putting it up for everybody in the community to give me critiques/suggestions.

[ChantalFournier]

OMG, the demon guy is eating the shooter's head! Hehe. Ok, cool sepia/beige thing going on, except that one of the main center of interest (the shooter) is beige too so he fades in the bg a little too much.

Also, this is a very weird awkward pose to bend both legs evenly like that, he looks like he will fall back anytime now. Get good references, act out the pose to get a feel of what he is doing.

The skull at the front has a problem, it's like we see the back of his head but the side of his jaw.

Oh and that demon eating his head tangent is a very big problem. Unless you mean it to be a joke.

[donnguyenart]

Thanks for the critique!