Fedodika the Koala
#21
Aww yeeeeeaaaaa I'm digging those skull studies Fedodika! I hope they were as nice for your learning as they are nice to look at :)

Woo! I like the concepts behind these last two pieces! The top one I find is very alluring o:

Mm, for critz I would say - in general, even the most dull of subject matters can look unbelievaballs if the form has been rendered like a boss. It's all about those simple 3D objects - the geometry that is the structure of everything we see in our world - spheres, cubes, cylinders, cones - interlocking into the other till each individual form comes together to create a unified structure e.g the human figure or a lamp o.O etc. I believe that's one thing that's really going to take your art to the next level! :D

Oh and maybe try working on representing the differences in different types of materials? E.g fur vs. Reptile scales or skin

I hope that helps in some way!
Keep it up as always!! :D

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#22
You seem to do a really good amount of studies to work towards improving.
I'll make sure to come here regularly to see how you're doing =)

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#23
hey thanks guys! i creep here but i post alot on other forums especially sycra.net; i guess i could leave a few of my recent works thoug! thanks smurf on finding the top one very "alluring"! i put like 2 days into that and it's great to hear someone liked it! thank you! i think i'll try to upload in better quality there is a TON of detail that got murdered in the upload :/

Full res http://imgur.com/gallery/X8bV61D/new

Come to think of it on the materials things, i spend way too much time on skin and i need to do some studies of reptiles and scales and such, so awesome idea! really most the things i make are terrible so i dont post em here, maybe i should just but it's just more uploading and i'd rather get back to work

thanks raedrob, i hope im improving and thanks for the kind words!

http://www.sycra.net/forum/viewtopic.php...&start=180 you can see my progress from day 1 here haha


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#24
Dayum Fedodika, dayum

I spent ages just going through your sketchy over at Sycra.net -- daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum!
Talk about hardworking!!
Yep, the improvement is soo obvious now - though I'm still peeved that you don't post all your stuff here >_>"

This last piece looks pretty sweet! I just feel it needs more contrast to give it that extra POP! :D
Keep it comiiiinggggg Th_100_!

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#25
thanks smurf! i appreciate your comment so much! we started around the same time which is funny and i'd say we're around the same level which is crazy; we can get there if we just keep burnin all them cylinders it's gonna pay off!
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#26
Haha nice stuff man you should post more, you've got an interesting imagination, I like them weird....animal....things on the last post of page 1, also like that armor study.
I agree with smurfette though some of this stuff does need a bit more contrast.

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#27
You should really post some recent work here. As a crit I think you could use some sharper edges in your painting, mostly in the points of interest.

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#28
Thanks for stopping by my sb. Will try to implement. stop by soon again to see more rendered stuff ^^

And it would be cool to see some recent stuff, I know posting can be a pain, but it will be awesome to look back in a few years!

No matter the tool as long as it's cool!

-Sketchbook-
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#29
As a crit I would say your stuff could use a wider value range and some hard vs soft elements. Good job on the work so far!
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#30
eyyy guys thanks for the kind words and stuff you can see all my recent stuff here
http://www.sycra.net/forum/viewtopic.php...&start=280

i wanna "finish" my journey out on the sycra forum because i feel i owe it to them :)

this sb always gets tagged every now and then so i'll just leave some recent things i did lol :D

http://ksfedodika.deviantart.com/ this is my DA, you can follow me if you really wanna

See ya around!


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70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#31
Nice start to your sketchbook here mang. As a crit, would suggest more anatomy/structure studies, I think they would help a lot. Hope you keep goin with the updatess, don't stop! You should post here as much as you do on Sycra's forum (we won't tell on you)

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#32
SCREW U PNATE mln>.<

but naw, thanks dude i'll try to do the things you mentioned; rn i'm just gonna focus on more structure and finishing abilites since i need that the most. i need you to kick my ass on occasion anyways lol

plz don't tell tho i will get in lots of truble Wisecracker


here is a sgt study, an app, hand application from hampton, some foxy feet and a wip. i did some thumbnails for the thing i'd like to see which one you think would be best to render. its a girl with kinda bdsm final fantasy n bat wings costume stealing dragon eggs real original right?? .______.


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70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#33
the gestures are from imagination and the last is a WIP!


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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#34
erryday


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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#35
gonna do some lucian freud studies soon to get me outta this rut i feel like i'm in. also workin on a pencil portrait for a relative i'll upload a pic when finished :)


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70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#36
lucian freud study of "head of a big man" was very challenging and i did it no justice but i learned tons!


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70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#37
here's a thing!


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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#38
have a sammich!


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70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#39
wip and some 1 hr studies top left after olly lawson/tehmeh


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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#40
lol these are embarassing haha


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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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