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		Nice work Tawny. I'm glad to see you have a goal project in mind. I think I'm having trouble getting a read on these guys. The designs feel a little vague. They could be cops, criminals, mercenaries, zombie survivors or whatever. I'm not getting a read on their personalities either. One of the first things I look for is facial expressions and body language. These guys are way too neutral.
The lighting on the female is too defused. I have no idea where the lighting is coming from.
	
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Those character designs are looking pretty good - one thing I'd say is to work on a greater range of value.  The dude with the gun barely goes brighter than a middle gray.  The girl has better range but it's all kind of segregated into various shapes which makes it flatter than it probably should be.  Anyway, keep it up!
	
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Nice characters but they do seem to be lacking in a little personality as mentioned above. I like the motorcycle piece reminds me of joy from the shenmue video game.
	
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		the girl on the bike looks great! try doing more color studies