drawabox lesson 14 composition thumbs (paintover please!)
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I'm pretty new at this, as you can see I'm just finishing up drawabox lessons and even though I know all the things at a theoretical level (cause I've been lurking in the shadows of concept-art for some time and I've read/watches pretty much all I could find) my paints on compositions are obviously beginner level, but I don't think that they're beyond being saved :D.

Would be awesome if anyone could do some paintovers on these! I'd really like to see how you would improve on them (if you can save them! hahah).

Thank you!


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Hi Razvanc-r!
Nice job on the thumbnails! I don't really do well in composition but I thought it be worth a try to do an overpainting for your thumbs. I hope I somehow got the idea you're going for, but yea I'm pretty much just guessing. Haha. Anyways, I explained how I went about it in this video. I hope you don't mind haha I'm doing this to help myself improve explaining things verbally. Hope it helps you in any way!  Laugh

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Hey @juelle, thanks, pretty sweet, thanks for taking the time to answer my post :-D. I find my thumbs lacking generally pretty badly :-D. I like the painovers, except the first :-P, I was going for a dynamic pose which you didn't capture in yours, other than that nice improvements! Will take a look at the vid later, when I get the time!

Thanks again! Have a nice weekend :-D

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Excellent :D. Watched the video, I totally agree on 1 about where the guys are facing and the and about maybe placing them higher, I'll have to try that and see where it goes. I still think that your paint over looses the dynamism that I was going for though, other than that nice tips!

The second one, no :)) the guy, wasn't supposed to be a giant, but oh well... he was supposed to be some traveler or something that finally found the destination he was looking for, hence pointing :). I like how you add more depth through overlap though. Need to explore that some more.

And about the last, yes, totally agree, that place in the left/middle of the image is kind of lacking, something should be added there. Also I hate my clouds :D better practice those.

All in all nice tips! Thanks very much. Also digging the erotic music! But you might want to lower the volume of it a bit cause your voice is barely understandable at times :)

Thanks again!

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