Some critique is nice.
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Something recently finished:

[Image: the_delta_s_reach_by_my57-d6thy59.jpg]

Any pointers would be great on how to improve upon it. I'll probably rework it a bit after I'm done a few other projects.

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#2
I think the composition is a bit heavy on the left side - something to the right to balance it might be something to think about.. I love the rendering on the sky and the city!

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#3
Ah thanks, the composition is something that needs to be fixed up. I got some good critique on reddit as well on it so every bit helps!

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#4
like Kaffer mentioned heavy on the left. Good use of scale and superposition

if you need to re-study some aspect of composition here is a link:
http://ctrlpaint.com/library
see 4) Composition Basics


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