Looking for critique!
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Hey man, nice start. I will give a more detailed critique when I get chance but wanted to give you something real quick now as I don't know what timescales you're under ...

The shadows on your character don't match up with the position of the sun.

The shadows suggest that the sun is up higher, probably off the top of the panel?

Maybe have another look at this.

Good luck :).

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Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-14-2020, 02:47 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by Artloader - 03-14-2020, 08:46 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by Artloader - 03-14-2020, 08:48 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-14-2020, 10:36 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-17-2020, 12:24 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by Artloader - 03-18-2020, 09:00 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-19-2020, 12:43 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by xelfereht - 06-13-2020, 02:29 AM

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