Looking for critique!
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Hi Jyonny, wow the water is looking awesome man - great job.

I had another look at this piece and took the liberty of doing a quick paint-over just to illustrate a few ideas I had for you:

1. I took out the sun and assumed that it is located somewhere up above the top edge of the frame.
2. I gave the fully lit planes a warm light.
3. I gave the shadow planes a cooler light.
4. I played with the shadow shapes on her skirt assuming the light is coming down vertically.
5. I added some reflected light onto her legs, the underside of her skirt and in the shadow on her right torso.
6. I made the higher clouds more strongly lit by the sun and gave the light a warmer hue.
7. I changed the shadows on her legs to match a top down light direction.

Hope this helps, if not please ignore but either way - best of luck my friend :).



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Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-14-2020, 02:47 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by Artloader - 03-14-2020, 08:46 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by Artloader - 03-14-2020, 08:48 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-14-2020, 10:36 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-17-2020, 12:24 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by Artloader - 03-18-2020, 09:00 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by JyonnyNovice - 03-19-2020, 12:43 AM
RE: Looking for critique! - by xelfereht - 06-13-2020, 02:29 AM

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