10-30-2012, 12:29 PM
Jones where do i begin. You have a wonderful sense of creature design. When i see your work a see a very early Brent. Your main issues is your rendering. You have a very unique style of art that you embrace as your own.. So we are going to work on the rendering. 1. You should push the blacks in your images. 2.. Texture is something we can work on together. I would love to see you reach your goals. I did a paint over for you.. I made a few small changes. I made the eye larger.. Because in certain cases the smaller eyes make your creatures seem less intelligent.. I have a heavy hand when it comes to the wacom pad. I just cant get the same feel of a pencil. So i lower the opacity so i can get the values i want. There is no need to paint and 100% opacity all the time. When you have some free time come out to the stream and ill continue to help.. Because we have the next assignment due this week. I hope you found this somewhat helpful...I cant speak it better than i can type it.. :) YOu are a really good artist and i would like to help you reach your full potential.
If you dont feel a kick in the pants, allow me to get a bigger boot..
http://www.livestream.com/mrahart
http://www.youtube.com/user/mrahsart
http://mrahart.deviantart.com/
http://www.mrah.org
http://www.livestream.com/mrahart
http://www.youtube.com/user/mrahsart
http://mrahart.deviantart.com/
http://www.mrah.org