03-05-2013, 06:02 AM
Hey mate, really loving the pose of no. 7 because youve got the lines of motion in contrasting directions, so the movement in it really comes out. 8 feels too sloping and slanted, it feels like there is no dragging force pulling them back up the hill if that makes sense. Move his right arm back so that it is facing up the hill (in a kind of ezio style way, by his cheek maybe?) and it will help balance it I feel. I like no. 6, i almost feel like he's pulling the wolf back on a chain which is a nice feel of motion, but his pose isnt very obvious. Try simplifying it a bit, and get the lines of motion a bit more sorted out, as i like the way he is weighted with his leaning stance but there doesnt seem to be much support for him, so his grounding appears weak.
Wow... I can talk a lot about stuff that I cant myself do! Andrew Loomis books are really good for this sort of thing, 'Figure drawing for all its worth' is a good start, free ebook download somewhere ( sorry i got it ages ago :/) im sure you can find it if you want.
Really good stuff going on here mate, and looking forward to seeing where you take it ;)
Wow... I can talk a lot about stuff that I cant myself do! Andrew Loomis books are really good for this sort of thing, 'Figure drawing for all its worth' is a good start, free ebook download somewhere ( sorry i got it ages ago :/) im sure you can find it if you want.
Really good stuff going on here mate, and looking forward to seeing where you take it ;)