derA's tome of doodling

[derA]

hello! I really dig the pencil in your first post. it's awesum ^^
I do notice some things in the wip in post #8
-the left shoulderpad has a bit of a perspective error, it looks like its more at the front of the chest than the right shoulderpad
- the front foot is too small. (and flat) take a look at some pictures of the frontview of some feet, and you'll see what I mean
-the neck area still looks a bit flat, you might wanna take a closer look at that
I hope that's been helpfull (:
cya!

Yes I completely agree, the right side is the second run through on the rendering and placement, so I haven't gotten to that part yet on the left one, planning to remove it completely and redesign it as it looks like a half-eaten rock at this state:P
Feet is one of my many weak areas in painting so I'll definetly look into that, thanks for the tip!
Now that you mention it I also see the issue with the neck, will try to fix that:)
that was extremely helpful and I appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback!