The nameless IP (Quantum Control)

[Andromonoid]

It's a cool design, and I don't think it looks much alike LMS, it's only the helmet that reminds of it. It's a bit the same grey scale values, not much contrast. What you could do is to make the areas in the shadows darker, especially "contact shadow" areas - that will say like the shadow just at the belt, a thin dark line in the shadows could make a big difference.