[NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP
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Hey,

Try flipping your image once in a while.
The bodies look ok, nicely entwined. But the head of the blonde looks kind of weird when you flip it. I added where the line should just about be.

Also, I'm confused if the one on top is a girl or a boy. If it's a boy, I'm seeing a boob.
If it's a girl, the buttocks is too muscular. Looks like she/he's thrusting.

Also, the one on top has no eyes.

Hope that helps


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[NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP - by meat - 11-24-2013, 12:45 PM
RE: [NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP - by meat - 11-26-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: [NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP - by DoubleThink - 11-29-2013, 06:42 AM
RE: [NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP - by meat - 11-30-2013, 11:10 PM
RE: [NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP - by meat - 12-03-2013, 12:37 PM
RE: [NSFW] Anime style fanart WIP - by meat - 12-06-2013, 02:42 PM

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