03-17-2014, 09:25 PM
It looks nice so far. I like the design of the robot. Although the painting can be improved to look even better.
The background is kinda distracting, the strokes attract too much attention.
The colors of both, the robot and the bird, are equally bright and warm. I think, if you make the bird the main focus and make the robot more desaturated, rusty and grey will give your painting more depth.
And if you leave some space below the robot will help your composition. The hand is situated at the front si it has to look more precise. I did a quick paintover, hope you find something useful.
![[Image: 02bVQDB.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/02bVQDB.jpg)
The background is kinda distracting, the strokes attract too much attention.
The colors of both, the robot and the bird, are equally bright and warm. I think, if you make the bird the main focus and make the robot more desaturated, rusty and grey will give your painting more depth.
And if you leave some space below the robot will help your composition. The hand is situated at the front si it has to look more precise. I did a quick paintover, hope you find something useful.