03-25-2014, 06:12 PM
Love the improvement Lyraina. Those character design explorations are really cool, especially Merlin. Do you plan on taking those further? As Wolkenfels said, the space between the eyes is probably part of the culprit. The pupils and irises seem to be in the right place, but the thing I notice is that the eye shapes are different from each other at the inside eye corner, so the left eye (her right) looks shorter. Might be a good idea to put it away for a few days, then look at it with fresh eyes later. Eyes are always tricky like that, so I feel your pain :)
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