04-16-2014, 06:48 PM
Hi and welcome, just off the top of my head, there are a few tangents going on with the squids tentacles and the figure, also one with the apron. Some lines don't look as confident as others , did you rotate the canvas to get the best angle for your elbow to make the lines or twist your wrist to make some of them? I think the structure of the arms looks pretty good overall.
I think the apron instead of sticking to the figure (since he is jumping and slicing) could also be in motion a bit more.
I think you did a good job with the colours going for that sort of muted look but there could be a few more hue shifts to add more interest in places.
Hope that is of some help to you :)
I think the apron instead of sticking to the figure (since he is jumping and slicing) could also be in motion a bit more.
I think you did a good job with the colours going for that sort of muted look but there could be a few more hue shifts to add more interest in places.
Hope that is of some help to you :)