08-15-2014, 12:37 PM
I'm sorry if you hate me for this crit, but I don't think the pose reads too well. You drew it well enough, but having a girl have her arms contorted behind her back like that look uncomfortable and awkward, no matter how well you drew it.
I think it would convey the story better if she was turned more on the side, with her arms facing the viewer and herself looking at the monsters in the background.
I took a crappy pic of myself of the pose I'm talking about:
![[Image: WIN_20140814_161111_zps4dfc467b.jpg]](http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee268/Charlie342/WIN_20140814_161111_zps4dfc467b.jpg)
I think it would convey the story better if she was turned more on the side, with her arms facing the viewer and herself looking at the monsters in the background.
I took a crappy pic of myself of the pose I'm talking about: