Sneb's studio space.
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Hi, welcome to the forum. Id add some atmospheric perspective to create more depth to it. I think you need to try out some more compositions though. Its not very apparent what it is. I can see its a chain connected to a big object in a dark pit. The chain is the first place the eye goes to due to the value contrast and it leads me down to the object but then theres no where else for my eye to go. There arnt really any other focal points of contrast or strong directional lines to bring the viewers eye in.

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Sneb's studio space. - by Seb - 10-02-2014, 06:16 AM
RE: Sneb's studio space. - by Seb - 10-03-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: Sneb's studio space. - by Adam Lina - 10-03-2014, 01:52 PM
RE: Sneb's studio space. - by Seb - 10-04-2014, 01:27 AM
RE: Sneb's studio space. - by Seb - 10-04-2014, 12:28 PM
RE: Sneb's studio space. - by Seb - 10-06-2014, 04:03 AM

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