07-10-2012, 04:40 AM
Good start man! :) My critique is basically study anatomy right now. There's a reason a critique like that is vague and the reason is that it's constantly true. Everyone can always use some more anatomy/lighting/color studies. These are the three most important and always in need of studying things in art as a whole. Software and gadgets come second. Have fun doing what you love man! Cheers! :)