ThereIsNoJustice's Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

I like where youre headed my dude, the two plane simplifcation thing is very very good for constructing nice images and compositions! And yea people who commission like things that are tight and if you can manage it, a little expressive, but you really gotta get the tight stuff solid first. 

JJ's a great dude, learn as much from him as you can. As for your halloween piece, well i like the lighting arrangement, Id like to give you a warning about skin tight dresses, as they can really hurt the textures of a piece. And look i made the same mistake. https://www.deviantart.com/fedodika/art/...-731147441 

It looks like weird, and its not very interesting design wise, its like a one piece bating suit that doesnt end at the crotch. 

Try blocking a unique silhouette for the dress, im assuming this is a raggedy type of dress since its cut unevenly, like fenghua zhong has some cool fabric designs that are ripped and interesting. Itd be cool if you had like a strong wind blowing to show some intensity to the scene, or a less safe camera angle. The way you have the rocks they kinda look like tree roots near the bottom, and I rhink you could play around more with their shape, like even try ommitting the ones on top to see what you could add back in for the mood you want. 

But you know, the skull looks good, Im interested to see where you go next :)