06-26-2013, 02:19 AM
(06-26-2013, 02:05 AM)OtherMuzz Wrote: Hey man great work going on in here.
Ya know i think that you are a lot closer to being able to reach your goals than you may realise.
It seems your biggest problems just come from your brushwork and rendering. i think you should just spend more time cleaning up, cimplifying and rendering out planes.
I just spent 5 min with a chalk brush on this latest piece and this is the result. Good planes and edge control can be the difference between a pro and student painting and it pays off paying attention to it.
Haha, prime. Thanks so much for pointing this out! my brush work could definitely step up. I'll make a conscious effort to simplify my planes and ensure that I clarify my forms with precision.
Ren-ren-renderrrrrr. Gonna be a machine. I think I'll start by reading some Alla Prima chapters on rendering and go over planes again via loomis.