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cool idea, from what I can tell, its a horse turning into a dragon? The main area that bothers me is that one wing is growing out of the chest and the other out of the shoulder, they should be like the right shoulder wing, because the one on the left doesn't look right and is breaking the believability of the piece.

You also have a very bright underglow of orange which you are not utilising to its full potential by bringing some of that colour onto the bottom parts of the creature you can improve the image by everything looking like its all in the same environment (for some reason I cant find the word im looking for to descibe that lol).

other than that the back leg on the left has a muscle on the top part that doesnt appear to need to be there, that one would be easy to paint out quickly.

Hope that helps, be sure to come and show us after you've worked on the piece as I would like to see it totally finished :).

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need critique - by holdkocos - 12-29-2012, 07:08 AM
RE: need critique - by Markdotea - 12-30-2012, 05:59 AM
RE: need critique - by atrenr - 12-30-2012, 06:12 AM
RE: need critique - by holdkocos - 12-30-2012, 07:07 AM
RE: need critique - by JonHop - 12-30-2012, 07:24 AM
RE: need critique - by holdkocos - 12-30-2012, 08:02 AM
RE: need critique - by Ursula Dorada - 01-03-2013, 01:06 PM
RE: need critique - by holdkocos - 01-04-2013, 04:32 AM

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