Pyro Marines
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I assume that this character is supposed to be somewhat stylized/cartoony. That would explain the exaggerated anatomy. If not, I would say that the legs need to be longer and thicker (especially the thighs/hips on the left character). The end of the hands should basically mach up with the middle of the thigh. Also the way the character on the right is standing makes him look kind of fat. His legs look like they are up a lot farther than the ones on the left character. See how the black area of the right character's stomach is so much smaller? since they both have their chests pulled back a little, I think that this area would be close to the same on both. I would stretch the bottom half of his body down a little and maybe push his but back to help with this.

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Pyro Marines - by Archon - 08-28-2013, 08:06 AM
RE: Pyro Marines - by darktiste - 08-28-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: Pyro Marines - by Jonas Jerde - 08-28-2013, 12:24 PM
RE: Pyro Marines - by Archon - 08-28-2013, 08:22 PM
RE: Pyro Marines - by Jonas Jerde - 08-29-2013, 04:03 AM

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