06-05-2014, 07:07 PM
I think the strongest is the lower left one too. The background has a more interest overall, and I definitely agree with monkeybread that the pose is stronger. I also really like how you are using the waterfall to push her out, if you tweak the foam shape and the rocks, you could get a really strong silhouette. However it could use tweaking - an immediate read for me was how the mushroom to her top right looks a bit off balance and kind of sticks out in a distracting way.
Elements from the other thumbs could be incorporated though. The mushrooms on the bottom right of the bottom right thumb frame that image well and lead the eye in - the bottom left thumb doesn't really have much to balance the right side of it. Regarding the bioluminescence and mushrooms, you have given yourself a huge amount of freedom to tweak the composition though, so you might want to try evolving your thumbs. Make the mushrooms serve you.
Multiple figures could work depending on where you want to branch out, though perhaps present them in a less dramatic way - some kind of interaction with each other or the environment might stem that tense face-off feel. You have tonnes of flexibility with this idea, and I second monkeybread's suggestions as well. Have fun experimenting!
Elements from the other thumbs could be incorporated though. The mushrooms on the bottom right of the bottom right thumb frame that image well and lead the eye in - the bottom left thumb doesn't really have much to balance the right side of it. Regarding the bioluminescence and mushrooms, you have given yourself a huge amount of freedom to tweak the composition though, so you might want to try evolving your thumbs. Make the mushrooms serve you.
Multiple figures could work depending on where you want to branch out, though perhaps present them in a less dramatic way - some kind of interaction with each other or the environment might stem that tense face-off feel. You have tonnes of flexibility with this idea, and I second monkeybread's suggestions as well. Have fun experimenting!