Girl fighting monsters and perspective

[Fueras]

Hate you for the critique?? To the contrary!!! I absolutely adore you for taking the time to help me out. Thanks so much for the suggestion. I actually drew this for a class, and I will have to re-draw it at the end of the class. I will certainly take your suggestion into the account and thanks so much for the reference picture.

I think your suggested pose might be better too, because then we could see the girl's expression as well.

<3

I'm sorry if you hate me for this crit, but I don't think the pose reads too well. You drew it well enough, but having a girl have her arms contorted behind her back like that look uncomfortable and awkward, no matter how well you drew it.

I think it would convey the story better if she was turned more on the side, with her arms facing the viewer and herself looking at the monsters in the background.

I took a crappy pic of myself of the pose I'm talking about:

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I don't know, I'm not great with perspective. Do you mean something like this?

Ahh, that's a good draw-over. Thank you meat!!

What I was originally thinking was something super warped and comic book-y. Like super extreme. Where we see her shoe in gigantic view, and the bear is really big too (like how you drew him), and then we see the monsters looming over her.

I"ll try and sketch it out later, but the thing is.. I have it in my head but I don't know if it would look good.

i might actually try zombie's suggested pose instead, because I think it would add interest to the painting to see the girl's face perhaps.

Thankyouthankyouthankyou! <3 <3