Asexual Family-WIP
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I'd give the character more breathing space. Right now it's cropped very close to the edge of the image, and it's creating a stifling feel. Either give them more space around the edge - and it dosen't mean you have to do a background - or crop it like a portrait painting. Just don't leave a sliver of space between the subject of a painting and the edge.

The circular disk perspective is off, if that's a circle viewed in perspective. If yes, get a cylindrical tin - like tinned soup or vege, and use that for reference. If you're up for Oppa Gurney Style (gets punched for gangnam style pun), take the empty can and cut out parts of it to make it look like it has 4 legs, and use that for perspective and placing reference for the 4 legs.

Hope that helps.


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Asexual Family-WIP - by StardustLarva - 03-02-2015, 04:42 AM
RE: Asexual Family-WIP - by meat - 03-02-2015, 06:33 AM
RE: Asexual Family-WIP - by StardustLarva - 03-03-2015, 12:54 AM
RE: Asexual Family-WIP - by StardustLarva - 03-03-2015, 06:29 AM
RE: Asexual Family-WIP - by StardustLarva - 03-07-2015, 04:52 AM

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