10-15-2012, 09:12 PM
I'd start by suggesting that you flip your canvas, this will help you to pull out all the anatomy issues on the face. As we're looking at it, I see an issue with the eyelid on the right eye as the shadow turns suddenly into a highlight giving it a weird angle that the other eye doesn't have.
Also, I'd extend the tip of his nose out further as it seems a little flat and we're seeing too much of the far nostril.
But it's looking good so far, loving the light from the window and how it touches the form :)
Also, I'd extend the tip of his nose out further as it seems a little flat and we're seeing too much of the far nostril.
But it's looking good so far, loving the light from the window and how it touches the form :)