Taylor's Sketchbook of Patterns and Progress.

[darktiste]

There a better sense of unity here but everything feel paste in place because there little to no perspective cue. Overlapping isn't enough to create depth.I feel like the girl should be looking at the tin man instead of the lion because it create a loop back into the lion instead of going toward the tin man and i feel like the lion is disconnected from the rest i think you should move is head toward the other but at the same time i like to see more of is face so i am conflicted on this.