Taylor's Sketchbook of Patterns and Progress.

[Artur J]

Hello!
I don't feel competent to offer useful advice on fundamental stuff (other than tell you it's really cool to see someone working hard) but one thing in some of your pieces seem to be quite easy to quickly improve, and that is presentation. Like that dwarf guy, which I'm assuming is a character concept. The design and rendering are very well done but he still looks quite boring. Reason for that is you have super bright background which kills value read in your forms and makes them look flat. I hope you dont feel like I'm intruding but I spent couple of minutes on it to illustrate what I mean and how I would go about making him look a bit better:



This is obviously a really crude fix (ie. lightning is all wrong now, haha) and might not be 'your style' but I just feel you can easily make your concepts look way better if you dont torture them with backgrounds like that. :)

I'll be checking back, keep up the hard work. :)