02-08-2013, 07:48 AM
The lighting and render quality turned out nice man. You have no issues taking something to finished and that's great. I can see a few issues related more to fundamentals though. Anatomy; her right arm is suffering from rubber arm syndrome it looks like there are no muscles and bone especially where the triceps should be and at the condyle. Actually her condyle is missing and we should be able to see it. There is a foreshortening issue with her other arm, it looks mini rather than going into the distance.
In general while you render the 'armour' well it seems to be floating on top of her rather than her actually wearing it. I think if you rendered these around her forms more it would integrate better. I think your workflow of doing the naked figure first fully rendered then adding the costume may be why you are having this problem, so you need to make sure that you are extra careful with matching them to the figure really well. Hope that was useful crit?
In general while you render the 'armour' well it seems to be floating on top of her rather than her actually wearing it. I think if you rendered these around her forms more it would integrate better. I think your workflow of doing the naked figure first fully rendered then adding the costume may be why you are having this problem, so you need to make sure that you are extra careful with matching them to the figure really well. Hope that was useful crit?