03-01-2014, 11:22 PM
It looks like the mouth area flattened out because its missing that little bit of blue reflected light above the upper lip on her right side. I think the first lips you had looked a better with the shape of the top lip being fuller and more curvy. Take a look at some mouths and study how a smile looks. Its surprising how subtle of a curve a smile can be. I think her eyes look good. They make her look like shes Asian. Her ethnicity is ambiguous due to the rest of her features which I think adds interest.