Seas' journey into the unknown

[Tom Seas]

Second pose at the League. Start of render. Looks slightly better in real life but still lots to be improved on. Here's the notes if anyone's interested:
Don't put detail in everything, be selective. The drop off: intensity of light diminishes as it goes away from the light source. Closer to the light--darker shadows lighter lights Away from light: lighter shadows, darker lights. Edges fade further away from the light,
Simplify the shadows

Also more space marine studies