03-14-2015, 03:04 PM
Really nice stuff. I think the one with the hand touching the girls mouth is kinda awkward. It looks like its cropped in too tight on a larger scene. Just the hand and the girl in the picture is hinting at some sort of narrative but its unclear what you're trying to convey. I would show some of what the characters surroundings look like. Like what you did with the knights background was really nice. Something like that maybe indicating what the light source is. Also I would cut the bottom and the right side off and show less of the mist and the dark area to her right.