02-08-2023, 02:20 PM
Great stuff, I love the creativity!
If I had to give feedback on your comics, I think you might want to change up the camera angles a little bit (although I'm not a comic book artist so take my critique with a grain of salt).
. Although you do have varied camera angles, most of your shots are at eye level, or eye level zoomed in.
For example in your most recent comic, perhaps you could draw a birds eye angle of the room (with the character in it) as an establishing shot. I feel like that would better ground the reader into what is happening in the story. It would also be an opportunity to give more character to this guy (is his room messy? Does he have 3 computer screens? Does he have cables all over the floor? Is the room futuristic?) etc etc
If I had to give feedback on your comics, I think you might want to change up the camera angles a little bit (although I'm not a comic book artist so take my critique with a grain of salt).
. Although you do have varied camera angles, most of your shots are at eye level, or eye level zoomed in.
For example in your most recent comic, perhaps you could draw a birds eye angle of the room (with the character in it) as an establishing shot. I feel like that would better ground the reader into what is happening in the story. It would also be an opportunity to give more character to this guy (is his room messy? Does he have 3 computer screens? Does he have cables all over the floor? Is the room futuristic?) etc etc