Ognjisha's esoteric studies

[xelfereht]

@xelfereht Thanks! Yeah, Dave is freaking awesome. And completely you're right about the things lacking, im tryna improve upon pushing shapes and proportions. If you have time, you can critique some particular painting or design of mine, I love getting crits and i also feel like im close to lvling up, any help with it is welcome!
Thanks again! :D

Maybe this wasnt as much a serious or developed one but i felt like playing with it anyway.

Just tried to push it as i might do
tried to add some thoughtful over laps that will still read clear at a distance and some details to
boost the potential for wanting to look at it for longer, the suggestion that hey theres more to see
by using a less even distribution of detail level throughout
tried to get a little bit more force and interest in the pose. bit of dimension with a bit more foreshortening 
looking back through your work a bit further im noticing
your rendered digital work has allot of softness in almost all  the poses while your traditional has some very nice
force behind the poses.

might have something to do with the consistency of your strokes, somewhere in the rendering
its getting a bit uniform and some of the gesture is being subdued to the determent of the piece
I think the spacing of visual shapes including within forms is often getting too uniform

I dunno how helpful this is but hey its here lol

Ill might do some more paintovering. I should be doing client work right now lol the guilt
but I am keen to also work out why your work is reading to me the way it is