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Good stuff John. I like your use of references. Both designs looked good, the first one felt more fantastical, the second more contemporary. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Keep it going dude!
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Hey this came out looking great John!
I love the camera angle, the slightly tilted verticals give this a real sense of drama and that faraway look in her eyes is pure gold!
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Wow, already done! You're heaps ahead of me :)
I actually like the 1st sketch much much more, that fantastical feeling and implied deails and the mystery, and interesting perspective.
I actually understood right now after reading your comments that my approach is usualaly different, whatever I study, I use to choose difficult stuff and fail rather than to be rather confident that I'll do it well. The best approach must be somewhere in between I guess :)
I googled that Black Narcissus death scene and I find the woman's face there much more full of powerful emotion and feeling.
Also, black neck looks a bit weird for me, I think it's cloth, in this case you might show some quite a bit more simplified folds.
Good work on simplifying colors, your studies worked well for you! And I really like those candles, they create mood :)
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@Artloader: You know what, you just gave me an idea where to polish it more. Thanks!
@neo: That is true about what you've said about having the right balance of it being challenged but confident whenever anyone tackles a piece. I admit, it's sort of a cop out just to go for something easy that you know will work well.
That's true what you've said about the actress. I started the piece having her in mind, but switched her out with a modified Elizabeth Taylor! I adore Kathleen Byron's face so much that one day I hope I'll get to paint her as ref for a piece in the near future. She has a face fit for a villain and I love villainy faces.
The black neck thing is supposed to be a ninja cloth thing. Or is it? I don't remember! Hmm... But regardless of what it is, thanks for catching that! Now it bothers me much that I will change it.
You're Shit Sandwich Lite haha!
To both of you, thanks for the crits!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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