Artwork Please Help!

[Beluga_sketch]

Hello, I spend a lot of my time drawing but not much time getting critique and I feel that is one of the best ways to improve. Please help. These are a few of my most recent pieces including some quick poses. The frog pointillism was from October though.

[Artloader]

Hey there Beluga_Sketch, welcome to the forum :).

Nice start here on your sketchbook.  You've got some nice quick poses there.  One thought I had that might help you is for you to try thinking a bit more 3-dimensionally in your work.  With your quick poses, try using some wrapping lines to help you visualise the 3-dimensionality of the figures.

Here's a quick paint-over to illustrate my point:




Also, you should check out Proko's YouTube channel for figure sketching if you haven't already:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClM2LuQ...23462tQzBg

Hope that helps.

Keep going :).

[Beluga_sketch]

Thank you Artloader, that's going to help a lot with gesture. :)