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hey dude, nice sketchbook ! Painting directly is nice ( though when working from mind it's better to sketch a bit or poportions will suck a lot ^^ ) but when you paint directly, you should try to use bigger brush strokes at the beginning, and put directly more contrast ! and concerning the cloth pattern, you shouldn't duplicate it ! patters show well the wrinckles, or form turn, it's better to paint them roughly but accurately rather than having them detailed but flat ! Keep it up maaaaaan !
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Wow, that last portrait is fantastic! I'm sure she will love it. Your emotions are coming along nicely too. Can't wait to be caught up with the rest of the class so that I can participate at the same time as you >.< Good job Wolk :)
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Awesome, this last one man!
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Your sketchbook just gets better and better mate, showing improvement in leaps and bounds, especally with your film studys and so on. Thank you by the way for your work providing us all with resources and such.
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Wow Wolken getting better and better!
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Big big improvements man! the renderings nice though you could use harder edges in some focal areas like for example the wings of the nose on your martha jones study.
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@Vandall - thanks man - nice to know it is useful
@Jonathan - all you guys are keeping my motivated!
@Lumens thanks for the compliment and even more for the constructive critique - will try to think of it with the next portrait!!! (wasnt happy with the whole nose soon after i posted the picture)
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Ohhhh man ~~~~
I am just blown away with how much ass you're kicking Wolkenfels!
That portrait of Shosanna is wonderful and I'm sure you would've learned heaps from those SP lighting studies, I mean, wow o:
Keep up the good work!!
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I'll be back - it's an odyssey, after all
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Very very nice studies!
A small crit from me; I noticed that sometimes the features on your faces are a little bit our of place. Try and do some studies on the structure of the head. Mix it in, because the color in your studies is already quite nice!
Keep up the good work mate!
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The studies look amazing! Great to see you pushing to do work from imagination, too. Man, that is so hard!
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great stuff there. I really like some of your strokes. very nice :)
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Awesome last batch man :)