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ungh those comps are juicy man. And is that a...robot chicken? :) Poster looks great too. Only nitpick is the space above the scary lady feels a little empty and I think I prefer the thumbnail version in terms of composition; maybe because of her change of pose. Either way, you totally nailed the mood and execution of it. You were going for "creepy as fuck" right?
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I love your line work. Those lady in white sketches look bad ass too. I have to agree with pnate on the final composition needing some work though.
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Lovely stuff man! Love the ink!
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Solid work dude!
Really like how you layout your study pages!
Drawing out of perspective is like singing out of tune. I'll throw a shoe at you if you do it.
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Looking good man, there are some pretty neat designs in here.
I think some gestures could help your work, as I see some stiffness in your characters. Especially when it comes to turning and twisting.
Also, for that contest piece. I think some atmospheric perspective and some softer edges would do it wonders.