05-29-2016, 03:55 AM
Hey Artloader! Thanks for the comment on my sketchbook, I thought I should return the favour. I thought I could crit your latest gesture drawings in the hopes it could help you out on your journey.
first things first, it looks like you are rushing these gesture drawings. its not a race, don't worry about having to finish a full figure in 30 seconds or 2 minutes, figure drawing is about drawing smart and efficiently. Not fast. Saying that some of your latest gestures are good, I like the bottom middle, I get what is going on there. Saying that the top middle gesture, the one where the figure has its legs wide apart looks really stiff. I think its because you have used a straight line for the torso. It would have been better to use a slight C curve or S curve. But keep on drawing dude, I have defiantly seen improvement throughout your SB.
first things first, it looks like you are rushing these gesture drawings. its not a race, don't worry about having to finish a full figure in 30 seconds or 2 minutes, figure drawing is about drawing smart and efficiently. Not fast. Saying that some of your latest gestures are good, I like the bottom middle, I get what is going on there. Saying that the top middle gesture, the one where the figure has its legs wide apart looks really stiff. I think its because you have used a straight line for the torso. It would have been better to use a slight C curve or S curve. But keep on drawing dude, I have defiantly seen improvement throughout your SB.
