01-02-2017, 02:33 AM
Looking forward to see this have legs. It's too early for me at this stage to do a decent critique. Not sure how the entire story goes so withhold any changes I might have for panel pacing.
So on to the short crit:
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Edited:
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So on to the short crit:
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Edited:
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If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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