01-05-2017, 12:40 AM
The placement of the elbows looks incorrect ( more construction!), chainsaws angles feel off it also doesen't have any sense of weight,the face seems to be a bit skewed ( construction issue). If its a night scene then wahts the lightsource? if its the moon it needs to be weaker ( bigger fall off), if its local light needs even more fall off but also it will illuminate certain portions of the area ( im sure you used a flashlight in the dark so you know what i mean), maybe colours can use more variation and stuff like that altough i do like the mood of the piece so who knows.Overall its good that you draw things that are difficult for you, its the fastest way to improve!