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@Fedo: Yep - thanks for the feedback dude, my lines are still all kinds of shaky - as you say maybe drawing them faster is the way to go.  Also found that I really struggle drawing vertical lines from the shoulder on my Wacom, check out today's digital drills:



Also, I've made progress on my second book cover, going for a slightly abstract piece here with a cold looking lady on a black heart silhouette (any critiques would be greatly appreciated):

Hey Dude, just thought id give my impression..
i feel you could go for some more interesting lighting on the girls face. alternatively you could just make her super pale and contrast with a very dark graphic heart. the heart itself is a bit confusing, it looks a bit icon heart and bit anatomical. if you didnt mention it was a heart im not sure i would have got it.
so heres a quick take on it, nothing great but thought maybe to keep a bit of abstactness you could merge the shapes of the girl and the heart and stuff haha
hope its worth something despite being crude
im also not sure about what the cover is for, so theres that too
anyway good stuff ;) peeaace