01-11-2018, 02:37 AM
Great stuff man, you've done so much work!
My criticisms would be:
-It feels like there's something not quite right with your body (but mostly face) proportions/Construction.
Like, the eyes and nose don't actually belong to the face- You drew the head, but didn't think quite enough about how the facial features go around the different planes of the face, like the face was just pasted in (this isn't the case in all of your drawings, but in some -one eye is too high or both are too close together, the nose placed wrongly, etc.)
- Your figures often lack gesture and appear quite stiff, you could check out Proko's video on youtube about gesture
Hope I made sense.
My criticisms would be:
-It feels like there's something not quite right with your body (but mostly face) proportions/Construction.
Like, the eyes and nose don't actually belong to the face- You drew the head, but didn't think quite enough about how the facial features go around the different planes of the face, like the face was just pasted in (this isn't the case in all of your drawings, but in some -one eye is too high or both are too close together, the nose placed wrongly, etc.)
- Your figures often lack gesture and appear quite stiff, you could check out Proko's video on youtube about gesture
Hope I made sense.