Artloader - Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

hey bro, ran some rythms on your portrait and i found some things could be adjusted. The lips were off center, the cranium could use some more mass, the ear needs fixin, and the way you drew the nose it seems to cave in near the crest of the brow, which is a common mistake in seeing that perspective. also made the neck a little more elegant and gestural, and try to simplify that light you had above your brow in shadow, its like you had 2 eyebrows but i imagine you were trying to depict some light shining on that area of the brow ridge, could be wrong tho!