Coinhero's sketchbook

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I think you could reinforce the overlapping by adding the arm behind because atm it hidden and it could be pointing toward the figure in the distance to add a bit more direction.Also try to remember to use the rule of third for extra point of focal point.I also have added some framing element with smoke to add more drama and i also putted a magic effect going into the foreground to bring back the viewer eye.