Peter's Sketchbook

[Peter]

Hey Peter, wanted to point some things out here, so I did a little draw over next to your asaro sketch to show a big thing youre missing, and you also missed in the portrait. so 2 things:

1. Remember the cheek bone comes out and doesnt go in on the face, you indicated this wrong on your asaro sketch and the portrait, so i tried to show you how it would be indicated.
2. Youre indicating lips flat on a lot of your subjects, id reccomend drawing those nice wrapping lines around the muzzle of the mouth, think of homer simpson.

Also watch that cranium area, you miss it occasionally, remember the full circle and length of the cranium is encompassed in that ;)

Nice youre laying the original over your drawing too, that'll help you see better!

Thanks for the draw over man. :)

Didn't notice I messed up on the cheek bone on the asaro and portrait :\

All of my features could do with alot of work. I've spent this month working on the eyes as I thought they were my weakest area out of the lot but I'll definitely move onto the lips next, it's been far too long since I last studied them.

As usual thanks for the constrcutive feedback. :)